Wednesday, 24 June 2020

Writing Story

Olivia and Ella in the beach
One day it was so summer olivia and and her sister name Ella, there parents said there Grandma and Grandpa are gonna come to go to the beach to swim because it was so hot and the girls is not happy then there parents said to the girls you are taking your little brother and the girls was so happy for it but the thing is that they are worried about their parents. Then mom said your grandparents are here. Grandparents has a van there is hips of room inside and it like a house and it so big inside it is so nice olivia always care about her teddy bear and their, little brother got a new car sit he can’t way to sit on it and the girls were so surprise when they got inside the car, the girls jump inside the car and their parents said goodbye to the girls and when the girls got inside the car they start to play games in the van and then they got in the beach, the girls were so happy Ella’s swimming togs is pink and some flowers in the togs Olivia’s, swimming togs is blue and there are some heart in the togs. After some time the girls were swimming. Olivia and Ella grandparent’s is getting the food ready and the stuff they need and chairs, there little brother is just playing around after the girls swimming they ask to there grandparents if they can go to find some crabs and then there grandparents said OK but you always need to stay close so that we can look after you, then the girls went to the rock they went with there little brother when in the rock there brother ran to the see but the girls didn’t saw there little brother, then there little brother was trying to come up but he can’t so the girls was looking for there little brother then

they ran to there grandparents in the other side but the girls couldn’t find there grandparents because there was a lot of people and then Olivia heard there brother was trying to come up from the sea

Olivia said to Ella nooo our brother is in the sea then they try to get there brother up but they were so lucky because the man saw them they were trying get there brother up then the the man said

Man ‘’ I’m coming’’

Then the man swim to get the girls brother and then the man said

Man ‘’ Go find your parents then the girls ran to find there grandparents then  Ella saw there grandparents then she said. 

Ella ran then Olivia ran so fast.

When Olivia got to there grandparents there grandparent 

Grandparents said where is your little brother?!

Olivia said the other man is swimming all the way down the sea to get him

Grandparents Oh nooo!

Olivia said let go now hurry!!!

Then they ran fast.

When they got there in the rock the man was still swimming to the girls brother Max, the man was already there and got Max from the sea.

Olivia said it’s alright Max you're coming to us!!

They already come then Olivia and Ella huck Max and the girls cried 

The girls says to Max we will never let you go anymore we love you Max 

Then they went back to their parent’s the kids run and huck their parent’s 

Parents Hello girls and Max 

Then the girls didn’t want to tell their parents what happened when they in the beach because their parent will say to the girls they are not going anymore because they are not taking care the little brother,

                                                       The end of the story 


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