Sunday 30 August 2020

Story and Short lock - down



The whole of NZ but mainly Auckland who are in Level 3
Purpose:
To persuade readers about your stance as to why we should/shouldn’t extend lockdown
Topic:
We should extend Level 3 lockdown in Auckland.
Stance 1
SUPPORTIVE of extending the Level 3 lockdown in Auckland.
Justify your stance. Make notes below
Stance 2
UNSUPPORTED of extending the Level 3 lockdown in Auckland..
Justify your stance. Make notes for below
Point 1 - Because we reduce the number of cases

Point 2 -  So that it keeps us safe and not going back to level 3.

Point 3 - So that we could  go to school

Once upon a time, there was a turtle that enjoyed taking walks around the lake. While walking one day, the turtle met a speedy rabbit. “ I think slow - movers should not use the road,”  said the rabbit laughing. “ The road is for everyone,” said the turtle. “I’ll tell you what”  challenge the rabbit “let's have a race.”  The turtle agreed and they decided to run to the other side of the forest. The next day all the animals gathered to watch the race. The race started. The rabbit ran ahead as fast as lighting. The  turtle was lagging behind. The distance between them was getting bigger and bigger, raising the rabbit’s self - confidence. After running for a little the rabbit noticed carrots beside the road. “ Oh my favorite! “I didn’t have breakfast today,”  said the rabbit. “I'll eat these delicious carrots, rest for a while, then I'll resume the race and I'll be the winner, of course. The turtle is still far  from me.  Meanwhile the turtle was focing on the road. She never stopped and took great pains to continue. As she neared the finished line, the animals hailed and cheered her in support. At the same time the rabbit awoke from his sleep. He decided to run again and started to skip and jumped. Suddenly, he stopped and couldn't believe his eyes. The turtle Was almost at the finish line. That's impossible! He tried to run faster but he couldn't because he was so full. The turtle crossed the finish line and won the race. The turtle looked at the rabbit and said “ Slow and steady wins the race.”all the people cheered for the turtle.
 The tortoise won because he was determined and did not stop for a second.

The hare lost because he was overconfident and had taken his win for granted.

During this lock - down people couldn't go to work because they are all close and only the shops and the people who are delivering food to the shops. And also we are doing our school online only the people that there parents are going to work delivery things to the shop.




3 comments:

  1. Talofa Lava Lepisi, Malo le Taumafai!

    It looks like you had a good time in lock down I liked you last part about online learning. He decided to run again and started to skip and jumped. Suddenly, he stopped and couldn't believe his eyes. The turtle Was almost at the finish line. That's impossible! He tried to run faster but he couldn't because he was so full. The turtle crossed the finish line and won the race. The turtle looked at the rabbit and said “ Slow and steady wins the race.”all the people cheered for the turtle.
    The tortoise won because he was determined and did not stop for a second. When you wrote this next time can you put punctuation.

    Keep up the great work Lepisi

    Kind Regards

    Yolanda

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